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There are a couple false things or grammar errors in there that i've already requested to be fixed.

Please click the "I liked it" button at the bottom too, if you can.

Thanks!

I can't click the "I like it" button because I disagree with almost everything you said. A lot of the tips you use are either so simple that it insults the reader or it's perpetuating a myth that has been disproved. There is nothing about calorie counting or calorie deficit. Read some of the stickies here and you'll find a great source of real information that you can incorporate into your next article.

I agree with Trops. Who are you writing this for and what is their level of knowledge?


Matt

sorry, but links are prohibited.....

This is the new thing where people don't have a f-ing clue what they're talking about, yet they'll act expert in a particular topic.

Stay tuned...

I'm about to write an article about sub-atomic particles and their relation to our existence. I saw a show about it and now feel comfortable enough to educate the world!!!11111